In his
lively book on How to Read a Poem, Terry Eagleton has an early approving mention of ‘the critic who said
of some lines of T.S. Eliot: “There is something very sad about the punctuation”’
(p.3). When I asked Terry which critic
he meant by this, since there is no footnote in the book itself, he referred me
to Gabriel Pearson’s essay in Graham Martin’s excellent albeit dated
collection, Eliot in Perspective.
We don’t
have very much in the way of studies of William Morris’s punctuation, which is
why I welcome Stephen Arata’s comment, in his 2003 Broadview edition of
Morris’s utopia, on ‘the dash – one of Morris’s favoured punctuation marks in News from Nowhere, and one he often uses
to great effect. To replace the dash,
the Kelmscott edition [of the book] uses a combination of ellipses, commas,
semi-colons, and colons, which somehow fails to achieve the rhythmical effects
Morris achieved with the dash’ (p.49).
So here is
a fine literary-critical task for someone to carry out: to analyse,
with all the Empsonian or Ricksian subtlety one can command, the precise local rhythmic
and semantic effects achieved by the Morris dash.